托福写作:A high school in the community


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Topic:A high school in the community

It has recently been announced that a new high school may be built in your community. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details in your answer.

参考分析:

教育是百年大计(a fundamental task crucial for generations to come),当然要同意。

社区的孩子就近上学很方便,减少了路上可能发生交通事故的可能性;

可以提高社区文化氛围(将有更多的书店,音像店);

进而促进社区经济繁荣;提高就业率等等。

尽管社区可能变得嘈杂一些,但是总体上还是应该支持的。

范文:

同意建立高中:

(1)吸收就业

(2)让孩子能够就近接受教育

(3)学校的一些商业活动可以象当地政府贡献税收

I support the plan of building a new high school in my community, as currently there are no high schools in my community and the nearest one is almost three miles away from the community.

Students in my community have to travel a long distance either by any available conveyance or independent transportation. As all of them cannot afford to have their own transport and the parents are also finding it difficult to drop their children daily at the school that is far away from their work places. As the high school is far away and many children have to take either auto rickshaws or buses, there is a traffic problem caused in the route during the school days. There are also potential dangers as the auto rickshaws tend to transport more children than it can carry, therefore there is a risk of accidents causing by these overcrowded autos.

Also the land that was allocated for high school construction is being encroached by private people. Our community mostly consists of middle class people, and they cannot afford to send their children on school buses and there is a lot of time being wasted on transportation to the school. Our community consists of other facilities like a university and a hospital, but lacks a high school. It would also be comfortable for small children to go to the school if it is made in our community and the parents would not worry about dropping off their child at school.

Finally the high school that is going to be built in the community can also provide employment opportunities to college graduates who are unemployed in the community and ready to take up the teaching profession. In sum ,I support that a new high school should be built in my community.

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